Struggles
With every attempt I struggle to create a visionSo clear it focuses in your mindTo draw a painting of sortsWith an arrangement that triggers The subconscious to envisionSomething so real that it feels...
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a well stated look at what I think we all strive to do in our writings, dave ... to create something that let's another see and feel what we do ... even if only for a moment ... enjoyed the read...
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And so the story continues, on and on,,,,until our time stands still. So many different thoughts in this writing Dave,,very contemplative thinking.Patricia**See Patricias' Passions Forum At Poetry...
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this poem covers alot of territory........creating a vision is the writer's job.......understanding that vision is the reader's goal.......hopefully they both lead in the same direction........for...
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Neababyblu very well said you said it in the right words. Fiveftpl (Patricia ), it is deep thinking and I hope it works to hope a mind to thoughts.Just a Mona Lisa, you are a breath of fresh air...
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